- Critique 2 -

22nd May 2016, 8:18 PM
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Critique 2
Average Rating: 5 (4 votes)

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Mr. Creator says:

22nd May 2016, 8:18 PM
killersteak
I'm doing an amazing job with this comic if I do say so myself.

Mr. Readers say:

22nd May 2016, 8:39 PM
lifelight
LOL mr. Flower, you're my hero!!!! :D <3
23rd May 2016, 11:13 AM
killersteak
Mr Flower dun care wot ppl say
22nd May 2016, 8:52 PM
MadJak91
The important thing is for Mr. Flower to have fun.
While listening to some feedback is fine, he should first and foremost utilize his own vision :D
23rd May 2016, 11:17 AM
killersteak
Agreed
23rd May 2016, 5:27 AM
Boeuf-de-Kobe
S'all good! I draw like the same 3 expressions and 3 faces I know how to do and I seem to get on just fine lol
23rd May 2016, 11:19 AM
killersteak
If the writing is good then the art wouldn't matter. But is Mr flowers writing good..?
27th May 2016, 3:10 AM
MadJak91
Writing can be as good as the person.
The key is utilize your beliefs, knowledge and spirit. The way you work, feel and who you are. And use those as base elements of your work. Mr. Flower should proceed from there.

He is cheerful, supportive, rooted in place and observant about his surroundings and the meadow. Mr. Flower should focus on that.
29th May 2016, 3:30 AM
killersteak
True that